Eh this time it's not going to be some loser dog plea for a beta, I'm taking care of that myself.
Well, I beta in a very unique way (or so I think). I don't read through the chapters on the comp in Word or anything...in fact I hate that.
I like to read it off the alert emails I receive on my phone because I can read it line by line and it's a lot easier for me to spot mistakes.
Thus in order for me to receive said alert email, I need someone to comment on the posts. This is NOT comment whoring. I tried commenting as an Anon on the Prologue and Chapter 1 but I found it EXTREMELY tedious. So if it isn't too much trouble, is it OK if YOU guys help me do it?
You don't need to say anything intelligible, just a simple 'lol' or something will do.
Just do it for every part in Chapters 2 and 3.
I have the rest in my phone so it's OK.
I know this shows how lazy I am, but still. It really is tedious. So if it isn't too much to ask, I hope you'll be able to humour me.
Beta-ing of prologue and chapter 1 are complete. As you can see, I've collapsed chapter 1 into two parts and taken out quite a lot of grammatical errors so it's easier on the eyes. I suggest you read it if you haven't done so already.
Also pictures are now bigger. ^^
Thanks for listening guys XD